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Come on guys! Lets get this storybook moving- im excited!! Imma post again, because i might aswell xD hope thats okayyy :D -Ava

I made a topic about my trouble, but it failed, but here is the link :D -Ava

So I posted a painting I did of Jack Sparrow in this topic first (which explains the first reviews) but then I decided it was embarrasingly bad, so I deleted ...

Wow, this is amazing! You will so win the competition thing :) The only thing i can say, is that the nose is not extremely like johnny depp's-his isnt as ...

Herlow people :3 I have started a story, and i think it may have some potential, but I really dont know where to take it :D I was wondering if ...

Hey there :D Im a just going to add some paragraphs, punctuation to your work before I begin actually reviewing :) My changes will be in red. Dear Ellen Taggart, ...

WOOWWW :O I loved this so much! This is exactly the sort of thing I like to read! It completely grabbed my attention, and had the perfect pace too. Your ...

These are really cool! I love the bubble one :) -Ava

Fumusia I was watching the delicate strand of smoke, twirling it infront of me. So light, so graceful. My room was grand, and comfortable. It was warm, and cast slightly ...

Hey, back again :D Here I go xD Nitpicks mean only for me. meant* so I looked around , slowly getting off the log. commaaa :D It That probably wasn’t ...

Heyy :) I really like this piece! but im just going to spot out some nitpicks :D God, I always hated my life. To me, that doesnt sound right. I ...

My bunnies :D

Hello, here is the review :D suggestions will be in bold Reading, weaving Moving out of my recession Back into the slipstream The twisted world I’m not ready to give ...

Hope this is finally okay, Im sorry I was making myself too powerful etc etc, if it isnt, sorry again xD Name ; Fumusia Age - 18 Girl Good ... ...

Helloo :D please could you review the first part of my novel Foretold ( and the rest if you can be bothered :D ) Thats the link ^^ I know ...