aweqs

Could you review my 'Foretold (Prolouge+Chapter1) please, I would be really grateful if you did :) I can always subscribe if you want me too :) Thanks, -Ava p.s. oops, ...

Hey :) I am currently writing a sci-fi novel- but in seperate chapters. If you could be bothered, i would appreciate it so much if you could review it! I ...

Heyy :) Im just gonna do a quick review for this piece ( dont expect much- i am an awful reviewer xDD ) I REALLY love it! There is the ...

Chapter 4-The Forest I knew we had to leave straight away. Get away before the soul suckers came and destroyed my child. I had place Isaac on the bed as ...

I love your style of writing- very relaxed, and humourous. The main character is very likeable, and easy to relate to. Maybe there could be more description on how he ...

This was quite a gripping piece, which had the perfect mixture of description and information :) I didnt really notice many grammar mistakes or anything, but i guess i was ...

I really liked this piece! It had great description and overall feel- but a VERY sad ending. This is tne only nitpick i could be bothered to post: You were ...

Thats a really cute letter :) I also love the idea of letter sent from heaven- this piece really gives a twist on that classic idea :) Its very beautiful, ...

Chapter 3-Still Karina tried to get the lifeless lips to latch on- she hadn't realised yet. The corpse’s hands hung down by its little scarlet body, swinging back and forward. ...

WOWOWOWOWOWOWWW :O I loved this story!! I couldnt stop reading it, and finished in 5 minutes! There was great description, and vocabulary etc etc :) But the plot was also ...

This is really impressive! I was gripped throughout and I loved the story line. You could make it go further, but to be honest, i love it as a short ...

Chapter 2 -Born I was a mile out from the city; I had my back to the huge spotlights. A snowstorm was raging, and I was attempting to think. The ...

Hey :)) I am quite new to this website, and I am really impressed by the quality of the work here! This story really grabbed me, and I really hope ...

Hey :) This is a really amazing piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading it! The only thing I noticed was this: "Glum, I went to my charging deck, Uncle ...

Great read, i really enjoyed it- once it got going :) I agree with captain.classy- maybe you could spread that big lot of information around a bit...? Its a bit ...