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This was really, really good. On to the review: she decides that 67 will do it. '67' should be written as 'sixty-seven.' I'm sorry, I just hate numbers in writing. ...

I loved it :) The imagery was beautiful; the message profound. You're a very talented writer, Explosive_Pen! (So I will stalk you and read more). The grammar and length were ...

This poem is awesome! :D My only nitpick is: This pen writes no longer, It has abandoned its trade; It has gone on vacation, And let its ink fade. The ...

Hello, Meow!! First off, I really liked the poem! Excellent imagery and metaphors. I have to agree with Springrain; the punctuation a the end of each verse brings the reader ...

Aha! It was really good. Excellently written, and spectacular description! A soft, silent whimper touched the edges of her swollen lips. Tear marks stained her fragile face, and a sticky, ...

Nice to meet you, Helenelizabethclarke! Well, here's the review! They all expect you to be the grieving daughter, [s]I TOLD MYSELF[/s] I told myself . Just act like it for ...

Nice to meet you, Lost_in_dreamland! I saw your story and it looked interesting! :D This is my first review, so I hope I do this properly... People have already commented ...