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I sat on the bench outside the principal’s office. I had already waited for twenty minutes for him to call me in. Apparently, the principal thought that my attitude problem ...

This was really, really good. On to the review: she decides that 67 will do it. '67' should be written as 'sixty-seven.' I'm sorry, I just hate numbers in writing. ...

I loved it :) The imagery was beautiful; the message profound. You're a very talented writer, Explosive_Pen! (So I will stalk you and read more). The grammar and length were ...

This poem is awesome! :D My only nitpick is: This pen writes no longer, It has abandoned its trade; It has gone on vacation, And let its ink fade. The ...

Hello, Meow!! First off, I really liked the poem! Excellent imagery and metaphors. I have to agree with Springrain; the punctuation a the end of each verse brings the reader ...

To: Ohio Impromptu, Huff Puff, and AlyssaKyle Thank you so much for your reviews! I really appreciate it. I've looked it over, and you guys were right! :D I'm going ...

My first story to be posted on YWS. Please tear it to shreds. It's loosely based on something that happened to me. Thanks in advance! ------------------------------------------------------------------

Aha! It was really good. Excellently written, and spectacular description! A soft, silent whimper touched the edges of her swollen lips. Tear marks stained her fragile face, and a sticky, ...

Nice to meet you, Helenelizabethclarke! Well, here's the review! They all expect you to be the grieving daughter, [s]I TOLD MYSELF[/s] I told myself . Just act like it for ...

Nice to meet you, Meep and kittykat! Randomness! The joy! What? Me, hostile? Slander! I have never been hostile in my life. *Beep, beep.* (Have to get rid of that ...

And ZOMG totally stands for Ze Oragatang of Meiotic Glue. DUH Haha, I'll be sure to put that on my test! :D You UNDERSTAND math? That's insanely impressive. I do ...

Nice to meet you, Lost_in_dreamland! I saw your story and it looked interesting! :D This is my first review, so I hope I do this properly... People have already commented ...

I've heard of Tamora Pierce, but I've never read any of her books. Eragon? I. Shall. Not. Flame. You. For. That. I am indifferent to Eragon. Zomg... What a strange ...

We should start a drama/theatre/language lover club, Demeter! An oxymoron is basically when contradictory terms are combined, like 'a deafening silence.' (Someone correct me if I'm wrong) I just reali

^_^ I like the smiley too! Thank you for the appreciation, I try! Nice to meet you Haruno Sakura! I'm assuming that you're a Naruto fan? Knife throwing is a ...