averianmariej

First off, your story was really interesting, but a fiew things were a little confusing. First, why was the police officer even looking for him?

wow! i totally loved your story! :D it was great! I've had so many love dreams like that! i wish it had more detail as to were you where and ...

Over all, i think it was a good story, but it sounds a little like other stories i've read. It really sounds interesting, though. keep writing![/i]