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Re: Fragments
Hey there I think your poem is good, you have a really good idea of what you want to write about and how to write it. I like that you're ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: My Death
Mizzle is right about your structure. I agree with what she said. You poem is free verse but it still needs some kind of structure. It's like you're just listing ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Hello
Hey there. Wow you guys are so nice. :) I write mostly poetry, I've never really tried fiction before. I usually write my poems by hand and then maybe type ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The Tree And Me
Hey there. So this is my first review, hopefully it won't be so bad and you'll like it. I like your poem because it's about trees. :) Trees are awesome! ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Hello
Hey, my name is Phillip. I've never been on a writing site before now, but hopefully I'll learn something from it. Yeah. I don't really have anything to say.
Jul 19, 2010
