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%uF0A7 I%u2019ve learned that different POV%u2019s have different ways of presenting a story. For instance, 1st person gives a more personal look into a character; his thought process, his emotions, ...

thanks for the review! One thing I'd like to clarify though is that the point of view switches were purposeful. If you'd like me to clarify why, I would be ...

Thanks a lot for the review! I really appreciate that one line change you reccomended, plus it flowed much better than mine! To address some of your concerns... The soviets ...

Thanks a lot for the feedback! And yeah, it would have been kind of confusing without the intro at the beginning, and I probably should work that explanation in to ...