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Re: Hi from a french girl!
Welcome to YWS!! That's brilliant that you've been writing in English since the start of the year, a real achievement. Don't be afraid to put anything up on here, we'd ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: A Flower in my Garden (reposted, not so HUGE)
Oh WOW that photo is amazing!!! It deserves to be on the 'thingy thingy'. I'm not usuallly into photography, I'm very picky when it comes to things like that, but ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Specifically pepperoni pizza. :) (I'm always hungry)
austenite - sorry my computer blocked this. Sorry, sometimes it is so dumb. It even blocked Google once! That's no good!! Can I suggest something else then??? See if this ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Angel
ME!! lol It makes sense if you read part one, but I don't expect you to review both, only if you want to :D Thanks in advance!
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: The Fall (Part Two)
Thank you guys!! I know this is quite long, so what you were saying Jasmine about the bored bit I really felt here, I hope it wasn't tooo long!! Thanks ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: A True Vegas Story
OMG This sounds really good...much like a story I wrote ages ago!! I'm in!! Calling pirate if tattoo has been taken!
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: The Fall (Part Two)
Thank you to everyone who read and reviewed Part One!! Kudos to you. A quick note...you'll notice that this doesn't pick up exactly where I left Part One off. No ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Graphics Garage :P
The gorge :P OMG THAT IS GORGEOUS!! Where did you go on your residential camp? I want to go there!!!
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Good book/Series or not?
I LOVE the Vampire Academy books!! They are way better than Twilight, and more mature. They deal with issues that I find I relate to, a lot. The characters are ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 3
Never happened. My father died from pancreatic cancer when I was ten. I'm not sure I like the abruptness of this sentence, if that makes sense. 'Never happened' just sounds ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: This Summer - Chapter One
I thought I'd check this out because I liked the title :). Since you already got the grammar done by other reviewers I'll just give you my opinion on stuff. ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: Cirque du la grammaire est ouvert officiel! (Open)
Done, Austen. I hope that it good and helps you in your writing adventure. Is there anyone else looking for a review? I'm happy to do anything. :D It will ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: This Summer - Chapter One
Thanks for your review Cirque!! Really appreciated. I love getting different comments on this, I'm working on it a lot. I think, like you said, everything will be releaved as ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: Becky
My parents’ efforts and pocket change will only be wasted. I suggest just using money here. Pocket change sounds very out of place. I understand that you are using it ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: Cirque du la grammaire est ouvert officiel! (Open)
If you want to do one for me before you go that would be completely wonderful!! thanks in advance!!
Jun 13, 2010
