austenite

This is good, so far. I enjoyed it. It's the right length for a prologue, not too short but not too long. Just a few things though to nitpick and ...

I like it as well!! As an Aussie, snow was an entirely new concept to me until this year, and it still is :D I love this photograph because of ...

This is really good!! You have the makings of a great story here. You've identified the male MC's...angst, for want of a better word, quite well. The description of his ...

Fantastic once again!! I personally couldn't find any faults with it, but considering it's almost 2am in my part of the world, my eyes are a bit fuzzy :D The ...

This is a monologue I wrote back in 2008 for a state competiton. Titled 'A Rose By Any Other Name', it is a monologue told by Rosaline, the former lover ...

Well I'm never one to pass up something free, and the ones you display look really good!!! Who am I to deny someone with artistic talent???? lol Can I ask ...

Something I found hidden away in my writing folder from yester-years! My eyes water and the words on the page in front of me become blurry. I wipe the few ...

Excellent still!! I'm really getting into this, hopefully you'll post more soon!! I'm curious as to Alex's past and who this other girl was. I like how you are keeping ...

Another excellent chapter!! I'm really loving this story, you've got a knack for it!! A couple of nitpicky things I found: 1. Greet the princess. 2. Make her feel welcome. ...

I've enjoyed reading this so far!! I think you've introduced both the MC's quite well, especially establishing Alex first and then Anita (Alex and Anita, it's a perfect fit :D), ...

Firstly, thank you for the review!! It is greatly appreciated. I agree with you about that hook. Reading it over, I feel that there is something missing, but I'm not ...

BlueRasberry, I could rate yours but you don't have one :( Although there is a star there, so I'll give you 3 to be kind!! :D

I awoke with a start, panic filling my body. The bus turned a corner, jolting me forward in the seat a little. I sat back, trying to relax my body ...

Pulling my little black car into Charlie's driveway, I saw that only Bella was home, the obscure police car that Charlie insisted on driving everywhere not in its usual spot. ...

I didn't have a title for this, so if you can think of something, let me know!! Just something I had written ages ago and found on my USB the ...