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Re: An essay about hurricane Ike
A few general rules to help with any kind of writing: 1. Avoid "to be" verbs. There is always something more descriptive that will sound better. - Avoid the passive ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: The Angel's Lullaby
It is very interesting. I haven't really got anything new to add in the way of criticism, but I am curious about the fourteen angels. What was your inspiration? Why ...
May 18, 2009
