auraennalle

Don't say you're not crazy really, because we all know that's not true. You're just a certain kind of crazy. Are you here referring to conscience, though processes, or something ...

I've got to say, your proofreading skills (or lack thereof) are starting to bug me a little, but that's probably just my OCD talking. Either capitalize the first letter of ...

I remember reading this a while back, and at the time I though you had a point. I still think you have a point, but I'm not really sure what ...

Well, I'm sure you know exactly what I have to say about the subject matter of this poem, so I'll skip that for now. As a piece of literature, I ...

A few general rules to help with any kind of writing: 1. Avoid "to be" verbs. There is always something more descriptive that will sound better. - Avoid the passive ...

A few general rules to help with any kind of writing: 1. Avoid "to be" verbs. There is always something more descriptive that will sound better. - Avoid the passive ...

The first line seems to be in disjunct with the rest of the song. As with any piece of writing, the beginning introduces it. At the first line it seems ...

(verse 1) I could never ask for more than you have given me; The Son that you adore you sent to set me free. I love you more than life ...

It is very interesting. I haven't really got anything new to add in the way of criticism, but I am curious about the fourteen angels. What was your inspiration? Why ...

This is kind of sad. I always like happy endings, but this one is good anyway. It's moving. A little confusing, but I understand you are translating from another language, ...

(verse 1) I have a story to tell you About a once upon a time: A man lived his life for the day He would die. He gave his everything ...

I like this song a lot. Though I am only reading lyrics, I can feel the rhythm and the flow of it. As always when anyone writes that there is ...

I agree that it seems a bit short, but I can assume that the guitar part would add something. One thing I would like to suggest, though I know that ...