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Re: Gulvorian Tales
Thanks a lot for the comprehensive review. I've changed a few things around and taken on some of your points. I will continue adding more when time allows (I'm busy ...
Dec 13, 2007 -
Re: First Kill [Edit]
I don't understand the "economic ripple of muscle" idea? Please explain :P
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Gulvorian Tales
Thanks for the review. Well I'm not sure I see what's wrong with "the forest's edge" to be honest. The waterfall is to be found at the edge / periphery ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Tales from the Forest
No need to review this anymore - check for "Gulvorian Tales"
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Amarok
The part about whether or not he actually is a Unicorn seemed a bit strange. Also, I found myself wanting to know more about the environment. However, you have an ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Tales from the Forest
Oh yeah there is a lot more to come. Not sure why i posted that actually but i only just signed up to this website so I guess i just ...
Dec 8, 2007 -
Re: Night of the Living Pony: Part Two
Haha it's orginal and I like it. The weird stories are always the best :P
Dec 8, 2007 -
Re: First Kill [Rough Draft]
I don't want to sound boring, but the over description is an issue for me. However, please keep on with this and I will return to see how everything develops!
Dec 8, 2007