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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: the moon is

    I agree that there is a lack of direction in this poem. What is the underlying theme or mood? A simple poem must convey a simple message or moral. If ...

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The flower fields

    It would be an easier read if you double-spaced your paragraphs. But I like your dialogue. The initial exchange between Tricken and the Clothes-maker is very amusing. However, there is ...

    Dec 9, 2007


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