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I'm meerely using it as a substitute while I think of a better one. Sorry, but I'm trying. I just wanted to put it up on the site...

Bit more critical maybe??? Sorry to sound needy, but what exactly did you like about it... any parts that made you confunsed?

Chapter two part one up.

Thaynks, grate too here that you licked it. (Yes, that was gramatically incorrect in any way I could think of... but I didn't put a semi colon in, surprisingly.) And ...

Part 3

Hey! Thanks for the review. I didn't actually edit this one too much, but I should have. For some reason I always hit the /;/ key instead of the /'/ ...

Part two up:

Actually... the other way around. The drug effected only her, so the clotes were moving really really fast, but she was moving faster (something about a maximum speed) Anyways, cool ...

I'll check it out. Um... first of all, it wasn't blood, it was a jelly tip ice cream. Notice how I never used the word blood. Any ideas on how ...

Thanks! I appreciate your votes guys and gals, and I'll go and edit it now! Thanks for the feedback Laurence Branson! I knew that the letter was awkward, and I ...

Jenthura, it's Night, by Elie Weisel or something about that. Yes, I have read it. That was basically what I was basing my poem on, except I chose to be ...

I liked it. And no, if it was the beginning of the novel, I would keep reading. Mind you, I don't like fantasy, so I would probably just leave sometime ...

[quote='Kate.Grace']This is a really fantastic. I have found little (actully barely any) criticism with this. I love the way you build tension through threats. Make us rethink our opinion of ...

That's an awesome speech (you misspelled it) on how we're losing originality. I love how you described it in potatoes and then implied it in a human by that phrase ...

Wow... that was quick!