aswethinkweis

i know i have an issue with keeping to any sort of rythym if you understand. i trust all you do, basically wanting to sound just as good when reading ...

this sounded more like a journal entry than anything else. it was hard to feel a connection. which makes it even more difficult to critique.

this first stanza is awesome! it captured me from the start. and thats the most important this right? The dawn of the new era strikes, raising its curtains to a ...

i enjoyed your poem very much. i feel as though, it would an exceptional piece if you were to just trim it down. my ex.: We were once players in ...