aspiringyoungwriter

I wrote this story for the Legend of Paul contest. Now that I've written it, all I have to do is figure out how to post a link to it! ...

Hi there! This is my first Fanfiction and I really hope you like it! I wrote it about the TV show Psych . This is Part One in a series ...

Hello funkyreg101! I'm aspiringyoungwriter and I'm gonna be critiquing your story today(tonight?)! I liked the plot of this story a lot. How you began it made me want to know ...

Hello readers! This is the newest segment of my... hmmm.. I'm gonna call it "Darkest Night" series. So, this is the newest segment of my Darkest Night series. The previous ...

Okay, this was the first time I got the quote, bold, and italics to work so I'm sorry it got a little messed up. I tried to fix it but ...

Hello anaellelabonne! I'm aspiringyoungwriter and I'll be your reader today! While I really liked where the story was going, I have a feeling that there's plenty of mischief ahead ;-), ...

Hello helenelizabethclarke! I'm aspiringyoungwriter and I'm going to see what things I can find to fix! Not many, I'll tell you that! You're spelling is really good. Along with your ...

Whoa! I got about halfway through and lost my place! I started all over again! The thing that really jumped out at me: The paragraph size. You need to indent ...

This is the first draft of my three or four part story and I have to type really fast now because my computer keeps reloading this page and erasing everything ...

Okay I've had to submit this three times now because each time it doesn't work right. I've had to edit this chapter a billion times now as well and I ...

Haha! Love the way it ended and how you get the sense that everyone is in on some sort of secret but Victoria! I'm not gonna get all nit-picky on ...

Okay, this was a particularly hard chapter, and long, to write. It's going to need a lot of work, I think. I'm thinking that the conversations are going to seem ...

[quote]Every fairy tale story has to have its distressed female waiting for her Knight in Shining Armor to come and save her from her peril.[/quote] This is just a minor ...

Okay, I think this is the makings of a good story, but you need to remember a few things. First, even a short entry like this needs paragraphs. Remember that ...

Hey Everybody! This is my new(and first) short story! It's still undergoing editing because it's only my first draft so please, please, please criticize! I need it! Anyway, hope you ...