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Re: The Betrayed Angel- Chapter 1
Hey, so far I really like the story! I think it deffinitly has great potential and I can't wait to hear more! However, a few things I did notice, as ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Last World- Chapter 1 Draft
Okay so I'm new to this site, so I don't really know what I'm doing yet, but here goes nothing. First, I love the story line, its deffinitly something new ...
Aug 4, 2011
