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ashmel

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Pain

    Firstly,this was a very good poem.The imagery you've used are powerful and create the intended image of pain and shock.The rhyming scheme is perfect in mast cases and do not ...

    Aug 21, 2013


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage