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ashmel

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Pain

    Firstly,this was a very good poem.The imagery you've used are powerful and create the intended image of pain and shock.The rhyming scheme is perfect in mast cases and do not ...

    Aug 21, 2013


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman