ashleysweeney

great story. i can't wait to read more. I think your character comes off as a very strong, independent, young woman. bravo!

i really liked this poem, especially the part about ' we shared our first kiss and many more sacred moments, but now we bear our pain alone' I like how ...

so far so good. can't wait to read more.

hey i tried to edit it for you but i cant do it from my account. sorry. it's very good though you need to fix the grammar. like instead of ...