ashleysweeney

First off, congrats on successfully writing about an extremely touchy subject, and doing it without being crude. Personally, while I don't condone using abortion as a form of birth control, ...

“Ooh, this is so exciting!” Anne whispered, squeezing my arm for emphasis. We were sneaking through the alleyways and back streets of Washington with Robert, on our way to a ...

ok, first off, let me say that I really like this poem. I just have a few nitpicks. Take me away, to the land of my dreams. Where its just ...

Perhaps we should not kiss tonight, Beneath the hazy silver light; Intoxicated by the fumes Of cigarettes and cheap perfume. I love the description here. Perhaps we should not dance ...

“ Help! For God’s sake, somebody HELP!” She could barely hear him screaming, the fire raging around her was deafening. She ran through the house, going from room to room, ...

First off, i want to say i really like the plot of this story. however, I too am writing an historical novel and I have had to do a ton ...

great story. i can't wait to read more. I think your character comes off as a very strong, independent, young woman. bravo!

i really liked this poem, especially the part about ' we shared our first kiss and many more sacred moments, but now we bear our pain alone' I like how ...

so far so good. can't wait to read more.

I don't have a title yet so please bear with me while I think of one We rode in silence back to the house. I barely noticed the beautiful scenery ...

hey i tried to edit it for you but i cant do it from my account. sorry. it's very good though you need to fix the grammar. like instead of ...