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Thanks, Scasha: Yeah, my mom said that about my writing when I was talking to her about it tonight. She says I over do it sometimes. And, I think I ...

Seshat77: Thank you :oops: I'm flattered. That was a really nice comment. Of course I will PM you when I post more! Which should be soon :wink: I am correcting ...

Esme: Okay, the reason my chapters have gotten shorter is because I've had people complain that, for they were longer before, it was too hard for them to read. I ...

Esme: Thank you again. I know. I will try harder with this chapter to emphasize things more. I am rereading my work as we speak so hopefully I will post ...

Here's my review! Sorry it took so long... The roads covered with patches of ice, the trees sat in a never-ending death, nothing moved. Nothing stirred it was quiet Okay, ...

Esme: Wow...wow...WOW! Thank you SO much! That was an awesome review! You helped me so much! I'll go to correct everything I can as soon as possible and thanks for ...

All right, I know this seems long but what I did was just copy/pasted your story. All my corrections are in bold. Okay, here I go :wink: When I first ...

First, I finished it! I totally thought I wouldn't get through it but I did, so I am able to give you a full critique! :wink: Okay, back to reviewing ...

TNCowgirl: Thanks for the review. I fixed all of the "FAN BOYS" Stuff and all the others you pointed out. Hopefully this part is WAY better than the other....hopefully! :wink: ...

Budding Writer: Thanks for the review. I know this is kind of boring but this is only one part of the chapter. I made it shorter so it would be ...

TNCowgirl: Thanks for all the reviews! :wink: I will let you know when I post the rest. (which should be soon! :D)

Lightflight101: Wow, thank you SO much for the review! I have been struggling with this for SO it's really nice to hear about somebody who really likes it! :D I ...

Okay, to everybody: I am pretty much done with this piece. I might come back to it soon but I have like three stories I'm writing right now (actually four ...

Kelsey: I might just print this out for you. It would be easier for you to read anyway. Hopefully I can do that for you soon! :D

Thanks to all of you for the reviews! I'm sorry I haven't thanked you before but I am copy/pasting all of your critiques and I'm going now to fix them ...