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Lady of Fire : Your review makes me smile! :D *beams* Thanks so much for reading my story! Hopefully I will be getting the next installment up and running soon!

Night Mistress : Thanks! I am starting on the second chapter right now! :D

To everyone : I did a totally rewrite of this chapter so everything is different! I hope you all like the new version! :wink:

Scasha : Thanks so MUCH! :D Yeah, I have always struggled with showing emotions. I will try harder with that. Also, I will make all the corrections you have suggested ...

JabberHut : Thanks so much for your review! I know, I struggled to make this original. Hopefully, new ideas will come that will make this better! Night Mistress : Thanks ...

KJ : That's okay. I am writing more and am going to add more when I am finished. I just had to post the next part because I was too ...

KJ: Oh, don't worry. I won't give up on Isadora and Nicandro! :wink: I just needed a break from that and I got the sudden idea of this story. I ...

PrincessSitara: Thanks for the review! :D Well, I have chapters One-Four, if you want to look at those... But I probably won't be posting any time soon, since I am ...

I'm back! Oooo, very good! :D I love scary stories like this! First, however, I must start with the things I noticed: The fire crackled sharply and cast red shadows ...

Both to KJ and Esme: Yes, I will try to finish this. It's just that it is getting harder and harder the farther I go. This weekend (if I get ...

Oh, that makes me sad :( But, I guess, every writer gets stuck and eventually grows bored with certain projects. It happens to the best of us! lol Well, maybe ...

Thanks, It's just that I have struggled with this story for SO long. But, I really do appreciate all your critiques. A writer needs good critisism to improve! :D

Esme: Thanks again for staying up late to critique this. If you are super tired, I send my apologies and a cup of hot coffee to awaken you! :wink: lol ...

Kels: I printed the rest out so you get to read what I have so far at school on Monday! So, go ahead and feel even more spoiled! :D lol ...

Scasha: Hey! :D I finished posting my review. It is up above in the post I did before. ^^^^ Hope it helped :wink: