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KJ : Thanks, kels. Don't worry about being picky or harsh. You're my best friend and I trust your advise! :wink: Anyway, the first thought that ran through my head ...

deavarna_satina: Thank you SO much, Hailey! That helped a lot! I will make the corrections as soon as I can :wink: And I'm glad you like it so much! :D

mynamehere: Samuel Garrison is right...you need to actually give me a review. I'm glad you thought it was cool...but I need more than that. :? But thanks for reading it...I ...

Hey Jamie! I am back again. Sorry it took me awhile to get around to this. I just was baby-sitting, as I said above ^^^ :wink: well, anyway, here is ...

dommy65: I'm with you there. I am a vampire chick myself. I just finished reading the novel Marked about that Vampire Academy thing...I don't know if you have ever read ...

bunnie_i_am : Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you liked it. And you're welcome for the wonderful read! :wink: lol

Abocreature : I love your reviews even if you say you are a so-called "bad-critiquer". lol :wink: But I must say that your writing is good too! But thanks for ...

Night Mistress : The thing with Carmen-Sophia-Isaac will be explained in the upcoming chapters when Sophia confronts Carmen. But thanks for the "Wow" part :D And about the PM thing, ...

deavarna_satina : Your praise is very uplifting! :D :D :D Thank you so much! That was such a sweet review! *beams with happiness* I'm glad you like this so much. ...

Alarainya : I promise to be posting soon! :wink: Thanks for reading!

Avens : Wow, thanks for putting so much effort into this! It really helped a lot! :D Thanks!

Boon : Thanks! I will change the suggested above :wink: Yeah, my story is kind of creepy, but that's because it's a crime/police/murder piece...I guess those are creepy. But somehow, ...

Elitehusky : That was probably the nicest review I have ever gotten! :D Thanks a tone!! I know, not a lot of people seem to like the crime/police stuff but ...

To everyone : I just did a repost of this chapter and worked on more of the "showing" rather than the "telling" aspect. Hopefully that shows... Also, if you can't ...

Very true. Very true! :wink: Yeah, I am going over this piece right now so hopefully I can repost it soon!