ashleylee

Miss Morose : Why, thank you for such a compliment, saying that my story has something extra compared to Twilight! *beams at the thought* lol Thanks so much for reading ...

deavarna_satina : Thanks for that! :D And like, I kinda want it to be a tear-jearker but also a eye-opening. You'll see what I mean in the further parts. And ...

Merry_Haven : Thanks so much! And yeah, I'm kind of over what Veracelle said. I guess I've gotten to the point where people are going to like your story or ...

Wow, that is seriously insane all the stuff your MC goes through! lol But I did find it enjoyable. You have a very nicely paced writing style and I don't ...

deavarna_satina : I agree, Thunder is a great song! I love Boys like Girls! :D And yes, that lens pretty much gets crushed into a million pieces. Just you wait ...

Merry_Haven : Thanks, Merry! Yeah, I know, but it is unique, I promise. It just starts out like all the other vampire stories. Promise! I'm so glad you liked it ...

JFW1415 : I know, but it's hard to create flaws when I'm trying to do it in only one part. I do have flaws for him in the second part. ...

KJ : Thanks, kels, that brightens my mood! :wink: I just get so frustrated when things come easier at some points and then harder at others...you know?? I posted the ...

Here is the thing for Scars 2. Okay, this was good. I mean, you did well all things considered with the sister dying and her parents splitting up. And Topher ...

KJ : It's okay...I don't know...I just am really disappointed with myself at this point. I thought I had a really good idea and it just keeps coming out crappy! ...

Hey, I'm back! This was good! You had many things right going on in this story and I only found a few grammatical mistakes, such as commas before names. But ...

JFW1415 : I knew someone was going to say that eventually, about the "too perfect" thing. I hate making my stories like that but they seem to end up that ...

Night Mistress : Thanks! :D Yeah, like I know where I want to go with this story, but it is SO hard to protray it onto paper, you know?? Well, ...

Hello again! I'll get the individual stuff over first: Masks were either full faced or half and my own mind knowing that the artwork of the masks were absolutely magnificent. ...

Hello again! I for sure like the first few paragraphs WAY better. Your sentences are so much smoother. Nice work! :D But I did notice a few things... I sighed ...