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lucyy : You are too kind. Really. :D And I'm glad you liked it so much. Thanks so much for reading! booklover : You are the first person to say ...

lucyy Wow...what a compliment...I'm seriously flattered. :D :D :D I'm glad you liked it so much. And I also see that you have reviewed all of my chapters, which is ...

booklover : Yeah, I totally understand what you mean about Charlie and Lana. I will work on that but I guess it's because this is only part one. I have ...

Merry_Haven: The whole AIDS thing will be explained in the following chapters. Promise :wink: Okay, the 50's thing...I guess I wasn't going for THAT late but yes, it is set ...

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angel : Yeah, that's what I meant. :oops: I almost forgot about that... But yeah, I will fix what you pointed out. I think I was missing the word "see" ...

angelcat2958 & alwayswriter : Again, you guys are awesome! :D I promise to continue making corrections...I just can't right now cause I'm short on time :? But I promise to ...

Esme : Gosh, girl, you really put your all into critiques, don't you? I don't think I have ever seen you post something on my story without going into depth. ...

deavarna_satina : Hey, that's okay, Hailey. And wow, this must have taken you awhile. But thanks a bunch for pointing out all that. It really makes a difference. Yeah, I ...

angelcat2958 & alwaysawriter : WOW. You guys are awesome! This must have taken you awhile to correct and I apologize for that :? But I just corrected all of your ...

Night Mistress : I think I will forever be the person who NEVER PM's people about new people. I think it's just because I don't particularly like to ask people ...

estead : Thanks :D I feel really flattered that you say it's unique because that's really what I aim for. Yeah, the thing with Isaac is kind of a...lie?? I ...

estead : Yeah, grammar is not my best either so no harm there :wink: With Philip, I'm want him to be silent but also be a leader they look up ...

estead : You are too sweet! :D And I promise, cross my heart, that I will try to make it unique (emphasis on try :wink: ) But I will work ...

KJ : HEY BUDDY! Yeah, I agree with all the stuff you pointed out. I mean, I think Michelangelo's Night and Day might be a down-hill project from here. I ...