ashleylee

Wow, Icaruss , that was, well…odd, to say the least :? But in a good way. I mean, it was like the craziest conversation I have ever heard (or read) ...

Ooo, this sounds like it’s going to be good! :D I’m already excited to read more! I thought your flow was really nice, but I would have liked to hear ...

I think I may have an idea about who this narrator is…something about love, right?? Like cupid maybe? You don’t have to tell me but I think I have a ...

Oh, this is the story you told me about :wink: Now I am really exited to read this! It was a very good beginning. At first, it sounded a lot ...

I love that Isaac is her suitor, but I have a feeling that James is also one of them. Or maybe Isaac is lying? I don’t know…it is all very ...

Wow, that was intense, Angel. Everything you wrote about I could easily picture in my mind and I was all very good (except the vomit part. Kind of gross :? ...

Gosh, this story was seriously depressing, JFW. But I felt that you did a great job really hitting the problem dead-on. It is like the people only think about It ...

You have a good beginning…but nothing really happened that was really significant. It was just them going to the restaurant and then they went for walk. The End. I would ...

Okay, this is a good start. But I feel like it was more a diary entry piece than anything else. Especially the (….) things. Those definitely slowed down the reader ...

I think you may have a devoted reader when it comes to this story. I love Chinese history and the move Mulan, and reading this just made me remember it ...

This was good, Merry, as usual :wink: I do think you could have gone a little slower with the shopping part. It didn’t take them to find their dresses and ...

Ah, you can’t do that to me??!! Just leave it ending like that! Grr…I wanted to read more…:wink: First, the part that kind of confused me was when she woke, ...

This chapter was good :D It was a point where the relationship between mother and daughter is opened up. But the part where she said she could wait??….wouldn’t she be ...

Oooo, catching last line :wink: I liked it! Now this chapter was more significant compared to your last one. You had a problem, with the whole Tony thing, and your ...

Okay, there wasn’t much going on in this chapter. I mean, it was just her going to class and talking about Homecoming. You have to know that each chapter has ...