ashleylee

Wow, I’m seriously loving this story :D It is that good! The only thing I would work on is the thing between her and Cameron. That is sort of confusing ...

Hey, Happy! :D You have no idea how excited I am to read your story. I just love historical fiction so I am pumped and ready to go... So, here ...

Hello, Andrew. I decided to look at another one of your pieces since I like your writing so much. So here I am, back again :wink: All I did was ...

This chapter was a lot smoother. I liked how it flowed. Very nicely done :D The trees were starting to turn pretty colors of orange, red and brown. All right, ...

Hola, Bri! Your writing just keeps getting better and better :D This was really good. I heard that Realtors are having a hard time selling it because what happen fifty- ...

I’m here to look at your revised version of your prologue, and let me tell you, you did a beautiful job. The more and more you edited this, Bri, the ...

Cute! Simple and sweet! My only thing is that you ended it so abrupt. Are you going to continue it? What I liked about it is that you didn’t use ...

Seriously, I really enjoy this story. It is so real and so perfect. Like everything you talk about is so relatable. The flow is really nice and the conversations life-like. ...

This story is really good, Jasmine. :D I like how real, down-to-earth it is. I can totally get into your MC’s head. Very nicely done! My hair was almost to ...

This was a very cool chapter, Bri. I’m not sure why but I think it was because it was so casual, like you were telling your friends about your morning ...

This is such a cute story but I’m sad that it’s over. I want to keep reading about James and Sophia! :wink: Without taking a word from him, Sophia turned ...

Yes, Yes, YES! I knew it! I knew it! I’m so glad that James is Sophia’s third suitor. You have no idea how excited I am right now. And the ...

Wow, this is going so fast. Like everything is a whirlwind of romances and high emotions and gentlemen. I feel like you are rushing to finish this. My advise would ...

Intense :wink: I feel as though Sophia’s emotions aren’t genuine in this chapter. She seemed kind of fact, reacting very dramatically to every situation thrown at her while in other ...

No, she can’t pick Lord Coven-blah-blah-whatever his name is!!! I want her to be with James!! (actually, I want to be with James, but since that is not going to ...