aseka

i liked the whole poem it was great the way i saw it there were no mistakes at all. i liked the rhythm the most.But make it a little bit ...

I liked was nice i loved the rhythm.But i saw 1 or 2 mistakes. But it didn't harm the poem and next time make the poem a bit more realistic. ...

great i liked was fantastic great!.But it was a bit catchy And i think adding capitals would be nice but if you think it's not necessary go ahead you don't ...

exactly silverSUNLIGHTx you are right i didn't get it too try to make it a little more realistic and then i think it would be perfect but there are some ...

it's great :D good rhyming and a little bit catchy But great poem i hope you will continue to wright poems good luck :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: ...

If fish go to school all day, and children keep on swimming in the pool, oh! how funny would it be? And if there were fairies instead of fireflies, oh ...

wow it was cool 8) 8) 8) 8) i loved it but there were 1 or 2 mistakes but it was great I know it's true. I say it too ...

it is so nice :D but try to right a longer one next time ok and make it more realistic em.... i think that's it so wish you luck for ...

:evil: :evil: :twisted: :twisted: :oops: :oops: 8) 8) :shock: :shock:

banned for living in the country USA

many happy returns of the day Empress wish you a very very happy birthday i hope you will enjoy the presents you got!!

This is my 2nd story and I hope you will like it. "Come on honey it’s late” said Ex’s mother. "But mom you know my teeth hurt. Please let me ...

you're storie was great and cool 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) but there were many mistakes chirantha has showed every thing i have to say ...

wow :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o i loved it it gave me the chills great idea but i saw one ...

hi my story is about a child going on to a secret land called terebinthiya and fighting evil sorry ma by there is lot of spelling mistakes that's bec i ...