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What if at the cafe at school we had to eat spiders with cockroaches every Monday and Tuesday??? :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: ...

Sorry for that :oops: i think the correct one is Maldives!!

Mothers!!

Honestly i cannot understand a word you said sorry time for my question: If a vampire comes to your house and tells you to join the vampire race and it ...

ok it was great but a bit catchy :D :D :D :D :D but i think it would be better if it had more explaining and more comas and it ...

cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D i loved the rhythm it was so rhyming and the idea is great but no comas My story is hard to understand. If you ...

hey i would like to join!! Name: Eirda Elizabeth morkin Age: 13 Race: Vampire/Wraith Location: Aetha Appearance: History: Is a young girl loves blood,parents dead(she killed them without knowing) Othe

well it was good but quite short no grammar mistakes it was great and it's interesting but there was no explanation about the characters much :D :D but i liked ...

OK I liked it. And I loved the idea. But next time reduce the spaces. But if you think it's not needed go ahead don't. But what I think is ...

Aha.... aha... aha... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: How bad i am the 3rd to review.Though the poem was so nice. But a bit catchy and dull. And stop putting THE ...

i liked the rhythm but there were a few mistakes. You are here,I am there. legend tells us: "losing is something we can afford to gain." i hope you will ...

sorry but i have to admit it i didn't get it the whole poem was a bit hard to realize and stuff like that and there were mistakes OK here ...

OK i will give em..... 98%. It was great really but the reason i gave 98 is because the poem was a bit catchy and some places it didn't make ...

OK it was great i loves it but it was a bit catchy but great next time try to make it more realistic OK. there were 1 or 2 mistakes ...

The leaves had a wonderful frolic, They danced to the wind;'s loud song. They whirled,and they floated,and scampered, They circled and flew along. The moon saw the little leaves dancing ...