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:shock: supercalifragilisticexpialidocious! what is that?

Hi, my name is aseel. I'm still trying to find out how to live the life without being afrade of making mistakes.

Hi stargazer You know, you have a very nice piece her. I really, really loved it. I loved it when you said: Ask me to say those empty words and ...

Hi tgirly I don't really have critical thing to say. Audy and HarryPotterRocks didn't leave me a thing to say ^_^ Anyway, I loved your poem. The way you described ...

I can see it in your eyes I could hear it in your voice You need to say no word It's hard to make a choice I'm sure that deep ...

Snoink.... Hi, About your first question, I just like the orange, that's all. However! You can totally make the English version work too... just replace "tone" with "tune." The word ...

Hello Lavvie oui, je parle française. Un peu, c'est-à-dire. However, I'm disappointed that you didn't incorporate some French lines into your second stanza! I think it would tie everything together ...

Hi PenguinAttack First of all, Thanks a lot. I'm really glad that you liked my poem. Well, I my self like second version. :-D You should be pleased with this! ...

Kylloras, Thanx for the reply. It is helpfull, indeed. When all my fears drown, "When my fears all drown," sounds a little better since it more closely matches the stress ...

Hello 567ajt Your poem is really nice, I loved it. Specially when you said; All my plans are ruined- faith is all I got. Faith is what is needed in ...

Hi HarryPotterRocks Thank you very much for your post. You were really helpful, especially with spelling mistakes. I don't know how I missed all that, but it happens when we ...

Whe the rain come down When all my fears drown I see tyhe rainbow of your soule I hear you wisper:"you're not sole" Whenever I dive in pain Whenever I ...

Hello Thanx alot,Rosey, for your comment. As a matter of, fact I don't know much about poetry; so your notes did really help me. Beside, English is not my mother ...

In the noise of silence I heard a faded tone I saw the stars smiling And singing to the moon I closed my eyes for a moment Then looked at ...