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"Blow out the candles, Yuki," [just need a space here] my mother spoke clam as usual. I sucked in a deep breath and blew. I glanced up and saw a ...

Ehh... 9:30am? ^^; Ladybug or Cricket?

It's an epic poem! Do you enjoy a McDonald's meal?

Trevos was a sunshiny place that morning. Our mailman in question, named Mo, was skipping down the sidewalk, his mailbag slung over his shoulder, the letters and parcels inside making ...

It was cold. It was far too cold to be outside. Instead of repeating It was twice, perhaps you could use a comma (,) or "period sequence" (...) to make ...

Wow, this is very good. At first I didn't know if I'd like it, but I do - it reads smoothly and actually kept my attention quite well. I can't ...

'And they were wide eyed in disbelief and disillusion They were tongue tied, drawn by their conclusions Would I have turned and walked away And laughed at what He had ...

Your advice is well taken by this fellow learner. lol I really like your style of writing, by the way. It's amusing, to say the least. Having such little driving ...

That is, until that day. The day that everything went totally wrong. I like is, but 'That is, until that day.' doesn't work. To many 'that's in one short sentence. ...

Ah, the more I read the more interesting your story becomes! I spun around and saw a beautiful girl, about one year younger than me with short blonde hair and ...

No, I suppose you just think it sounds cool. You make a CD featuring Ludwig van Beethoven and The Who. What do you name this mix?

“MOM! MOOOMMM! COME HERE! MOOOOMMMYYYY!” screeched the nine year old Jimena whom knelt on the sidewalk in front of her Manhattan home. While on the phone Mrs. Poleski tells us ...

Ooo... and it gets even better! "Ok, I get that whatever those where killed her parents, but now she ' s just scaring me. And I don't think they can ...

Uh... her sideburn is kind of creepy. Lmao! xD I've been drawing on a more professional scale for about... three years, Maki-Chan. And thanks for the links. :) Thank you ...

He's undecided, apparently. Rubberduckie vs. Squeaky frog. Who wins?