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Also, from the moment they saw each other they fell in love, it was love at first sight. The new guy is the main character, from the very moment Nola ...

The first chapter and some other chapters focus on how they met and how they start to converse. But I have chapters where it speaks about from the male lead ...

I got your point, would try to change, also Beth already has a lover, and the male lead himself knows that. May I know how you feel the story is ...

I'm a first time writer please let me know what you think about my story. Comments and Reviews are always welcome.