artemisathena13

Could you review mine? It's called Return of the Gods #1: Artemis. I've only gotten one review and I want to know more people's opinions. I currently have the prologue, ...

Is it right to bump up my own story?

I am no longer continuing to post the story here. If you want to read it, you can go to fictionpress.com, fanfiction.net, or the blog Clan Archives. Thank you.

Thanks everybody, for all your feedback. Lots of stuff will happen later, so that's why it might have confused some people. I couldn't put everything important in the first chapter, ...

THIRTEEN YEARS LATER Chapter 1: A Birthday of Discoveries: Alex “Happy birthday, Alex!” exclaimed Claire. “Shhh! Keep it down! Remember, no emotion or personality. Besides, my assigned birthday

Wow. I thought that was a totally interesting thing. You have a lot of interesting things to think about. I agree that everyone has a different idea of life and ...

WOW! This was a great story. I can't wait to read more of it! I'm just a little confused at why he's in the prison place. Is this going to ...

I don't know what to say. It was totally amazing.

THIRTEEN YEARS LATER Chapter 1: A Birthday of Discoveries: Alex “Happy birthday, Alex!” exclaimed Claire. “Shhh! Keep it down! Remember, no emotion or personality. Besides, my assigned birthday

Yeah, chapter one is still being typed. I'm a really slow typer. But it's on it's way. It's also on the blog Clan Archives, fictionpress.com, and protagonize.com. You can see ...

PROLOGUE The young woman stared at the glass window. The Officials would arrive at any moment. She tried hard to remember her real name, but she couldn’t. She had been ...