artemis15sc

Thank you again!

I love how you're not afraid to be honest, it's exactly what i need to get this story where it needs to be. And I appreciate your snark xD.

Very helpful review, thank you :)

This gave me a great idea for an improved scene so thank you :)

Thank you very much Aurora P :)

Thanks love! There's a new one, you should get first dibs :)

Thank you so much, I really need to hear your opinions. I understand why you think Sedna and Artemis are similar, they're are reasons for that, and why you think ...

Thank you, I'll work on that flow in later drafts.

There are reasons for the power shifts, But I'm thinking of simplifying it ehre and giving the details of the wars and stuff and a later date, and just introducing ...

Very helpful, my inner editor is still developing, so she needs all the help she can get :).

Thank you, I'll work on this, at some point. And honestly, It was originally written in past tense, but I made a present tense version just to see how I ...

They are, I've been tentatively calling them Hillie, since I think that sounds funny, but Billunter's good. However....I have a lot of ship names for are my potential couples, since ...

You are seriously my favorite person. Thank you so much, I will keep all of this in mind when I get around to editing this chapter again, but I've got ...

I don't remember being confused about her name, so I'm going to go with yes.

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Your Narrator is the doctor! Just kidding, your narrator idea is original and cool, but I'm not sure how I feel about it. I'm not the biggest fan of breaking ...