arnav

this poem really did touched my heart....i loved the way you presented your feeling...it's exquisite...i just have some questions regarding some of your lines...such as, in the line " From ...

nice work.....did lyk the last touch of your poem....lookin forward to read more....

hey there....awesome writing...truly overwhelmed by your thoughts...amazing piece of art..only one line i would like to the fourth para.. 'the stars have shed scarlet tears into the arms of the ...

hey frnd.....liked your poem...won't be gng for a question and answer.....but just wanna suggest in one of your the opening line "death ia a barrier, a wall '.........you could have ...

Slowly dies the fraternity Hatred wakes up from sleep embracing the poor fragile hearts deep round hath it swathe lies everywhere silent thoughts wickedness in it survives fires of wisdom ...