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I like the descriptions! It lets the reader imagine what Gray and Claire look like. The word "Spring" though isn't supposed to be capitalized. Also, the story is called "Black ...

Yeah, the two are probably going to be Roman ones. Cause Percy, Annabeth, Leo, and Piper are all Greek demigods, so they need Roman demigods other than Jason. And that's ...

I've never played a Harvest Moon game before, but I've got Rune Factory 2. It's good, but you need description. The only description I saw was when Popuri ran into ...

Okay, there are some mistakes. Claire struggled to carry the two large grocery bags as she walked from the super market towards her farm. She didn’t go to the super ...

problem? you need the Solution of Evolution, once there was a little fish swimming in the sea, but he saw the ocean as a cage and just wanted to be ...

There's so much emotion in it! I love it! It's very touching alright. But you probably should cut the poem in to lines and stanzas because it's pretty hard to ...

It's a great song. But there's a lot of chorus. You might want to add more, cause it can be a little boring if it's just the chorus. There's lots ...

Okay, thanks for those tips! I think I'll stick to Melissa then.

Lots of good books that people have already said Harry Potter, it's wonderful! The plot, suspense, everything is great about it! Percy Jackson series. Love the humor in it! Everlost. ...

I have this story idea and I think it's really good. But I need a name. The main character is a somewhat shy girl. If you talk to her she'll ...

How about Abby, Sam which could be short for Samantha, Sandy, or Holly. They're all unisex names. Hope that's helped!

You should read the Percy Jackson series. It'll definitely help, because lots of old characters form the Percy Jackson series are in the Lost Hero. It's really good though. I ...

Percy Jackson is a great series! Rick Riodran is writing two new ones. Ones about Egyptian gods and the other one is another series involving Greek gods. Has anyone read ...

Great poem! I like the message. This is great. Can't wait for more! Keep writing.

I have another friend who read this chapter and she thinks that since it's a legend it shouldn't have too many details. I see what you mean about the yelling ...