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Chapter 3: Air The Air Guardian “You!” I snapped my fingers, and a maid ran over reluctantly. “Massage my back. Hurry up. Quit lagging.” “But Sir-” She started, her hands ...

I like the description. I can just imagine the monsters. Maybe some description on the main character. And I can't see Tohru fighting, the main character, maybe, but not Tohru. ...

I've only read some chapters of the manga, but I know what's going on. I think your story is really good! You might want to describe what the characters looks ...

The story was quite interesting but i was quite confused while reading it.

This is kind of random. The ending is kind of rushed. Also, Hermione doesn't like Harry, she likes Ron. It's a very funny story! I like it! Its a little ...

Thanks! Sorry but who do you agree? You agree with her? Yeah, I don't like snobby rich people either. :D

Okay, I need a different name. This is a name for a girl who's a tom-boy. Some what athletic, but not that much. She doesn't like skirts or dresses or ...

I love this movie too! It's really good. launched into a volley of questions. “Are you delivering your DNA?” “Yes Makensi.” “So you're going to be an avatar driver?” [/quote] ...

I find this song fitting the plot of my story perfectly: The Mysterious Girl in Black Shouts echoed in the large kitchen. The smell of food drifted out of the ...

Do we have to RSVP for this? I want to do it. I doubt I can do 500 reviews. That's going to be hard.

Great plot! It's really good. There are some mistakes though. Thump, thump, that is the sound Katelyn’s heart made when she made her horse speed up. Katelyn and her sister ...

The front was rushed alright. It's great though! I think you used the word "mooch" too much. You might want to find a synonym for it. You could use the ...

You found 30 mistakes?! I didn't see a single one! But people can easily over look a simple mistake. We won't spoil the ending for you then. But it's really ...

Cat and run? Sounds like a person is like a cat and runs away when troubles or enemies come. Like someone who is afraid and timid. And it does sort ...

Very good description! I can just imagine everything, As the lightening flashed and the rains sliced down, as the clouds moaned and the thunder roared, as the moon lay tranquil ...