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Hey, Undeadbunnie! I think your lyrics are great! Though, if you want to turn it into a real song, you need a chorus. I don’t know who I am I’ve ...

The Mysterious Girl in Black 2 She pounded down the stairs, breathing hard. She wanted to get out of this big stuffy inn that was filled with snobby women wearing ...

Hi! Would you mind reviewing a novel of mine? It's called the Guardians of the Jrakkon Stone. Here's the link to the novel: How much do you want if you ...

Great script! Is there a sequel to this? the plot is very interesting, a mix of supernatural and normal everyday family problems. No mistakes, though I think you should put ...

Well,I'm not too sure what contest this was submitted for, but I think it's great! I like how it said "She wanted to be..." at the end of each little ...

Hi Tinkembell! Is your prolouge a prolouge for a novel? If it is, then the idea seems good! Though I'm not too sure what the story is about, I think ...

Hi! I like this poem, because school is all about status. How one girl likes this one guy but he's so much popular so he can't like her, or something ...

I think the topic this poem is about is a very creative one. I'm not to sure if the people you're describing actual people, just that their names are scrambled ...

First off, I didn't read the first chapter. I'll try my best to understand what's going on though. Red is for any grammar, spelling, or the simple mistakes. Those in ...

You seem to like to write love poems. This is a great poem. I don't see any mistakes anymore. But the line "These eyes have cried for you" was kind ...

This poem is great! At first I didn't know who this girl was, until the very end of the poem. The description is very detailed. I could picture that girl's ...

This is pretty good photography! I think the first and third ones look the best. The picture is very clear, and the cat is just adorable! I think the pictures ...

Nice! It's really good! I like how it rhymed and what the poem was about. :D

I love it! The poem has lots of emotion in it and meaning. It's really good. I like the rhyme too.

Interesting... What is this supposed to be (Don't mean to be rude or anything)? Is this a discussion sort of thing? Because I think you have a point. But the ...