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A Poem by a fellow YWS user inspired me to write this. Oh , kind and ignorant child , how fortunate you truly are to have not lived long enough ...

Hey, I'm not real good at giving feedback when it comes to poems, but I love this! It's so true, about gossip and things when it comes to high school ...

Hey, so, I only see one mistake, where you spelled "the" as "teh": teh crashing waves seem closer Other than, I don't see any other problems. This was great! I ...

Hey, nice job! I loved this! Love: All is fair in love. But, I agree with Fand, the last part is a little weird, I don't exactly understand what Love ...

"Come in." Mrs. Ryan said. Melissa walked in, frowning and sighing. "Don't give me that attitude!" Mrs. Ryan snapped. "Sit down." Melissa sat down in the chair at the very ...

I'm not too sure how to review this either. Though I caught a few mistakes in the first episode. This was a funny script! :D I loved it! I can't ...

The Mysterious Girl in Black 3 "Melissa, how many times do I need to tell you to wear your uniform!" The teacher, Mrs. Ryan, demanded. "Go back home and put ...

This was originally supposed to be a song, but I think I like it better as a poem. I sorta wrote this connecting it to my story: I’m a castle ...

Okay, first I'd like to say that it was good. It was slightly confusing though. Is the MC's real name Lilly? Then why would he -- her brother? -- call ...

First off, the goodies. There's great emotion, and I love it! You can tell what's going on between the two. And I also love the last line. It brings humor ...

Okay, this is part two of my story called The Key. I'm planning on submitting it into my school's writing fair contest. Please review! Thanks! :) Adriana woke up with ...

GREAT! I love it! I like the emotion, and it's wonderful! :D Nothing much to say after that though. :)

This is a story that I'm planning on submitting for the school's writing fair contest. I figured that I could use some help on the editing and all that, so ...

Hi! First off, the thing that made me not really want to read was the color of the text. It's really bright and makes it hard to read the words. ...

Great! Though I think you might want to move this in to the lyric sections. This seems more like a song than a poem. I think it's great, I don't ...