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So this is an entry to the Text Messaging contest. :D Hehe it's kinda long. June 2nd, Friday, 2:32 P.M. Ashtar: My name is Ashtar, dear One, I must know ...

Oooh, this is good :) I like it. It shows how carefree and naive we can be when we're little. All happy and bouncy and everything. :D And the last ...

Aw.... that's sweet, the last part. So, she's adopted? Wasn't that her real mom, the one that got shot in the prologue? It's getting better and better! Keep writing! :D

Ooh good. I like how you start it off, you know, with the mother being chased and the daughter is just a little baby. :) It leaves the readers wondering ...

Good. I like how you put the Mirror of Erised into the story, especially since your setting was in a New York private school. I liked the way you added ...

It was extraordinarily and amazing! I seriously felt Asher's sorrow when she had to let go of her child. :O It's awesome! The front part was a bit confusing, but ...

Warning: If you don't like mushy things, please do not read!!! First off, that link up there is to a Youtube video about Harry Potter. Watch it, you don't necessarily ...

This story was really sweet. It showed how strong family love can be. I loved it! :D Here comes the editing part! :) I knew it was going to be ...

This is my entry to the What? No Romance? Contest: My song was Tearin' Us Apart. The song's lyrics are in the spoiler below. Please review! :D I just got ...

Hi Lolly! First question, is this true? Like are you really this Zoe? Or is this fictional? Also, I was thinking that you should turn this into a script. You've ...

LOL! I was cracking up the whole time! That is sooooo awesome! :D Very creative too! :)

WOW! *stares in silence* WOW! That's really good! :D You're a great artist. :)

Hello! :D Reviewing poetry isn't something I'm really good at, but, hey, whatever right? So... I liked this poem. Your words were a nice choice. One line I especially like: ...

I recently read these two books called Love That Dog and Hate That Cat . They were both in an interesting format, like a poem. So, I decided to try ...

They were sent to the hospital where they [color=#8000]were[/color] You have to remember to keep the same tense, example present tense would be something like "He is drawing." Past tense ...