ariberry97

Every day i wonder what I could have done different that day. That one day I mad the biggest mistake of my life. Will people ever look at me differently? ...

wow this is super good. i really like this. i like how its simple, and everyone can relate to this. it tells a story of how you just want one ...

well, i don't know what to say. interesting, i guess. confusing, like the other person said. maybe next time not so lengthy, and more on point. other than that, pretty ...

i liked this poem because it was very powerful. it had little mistakes. i liked it:)

honestly, i don't get it. i dont know if im being stupid (most likely, i am) or if this poem really doesn't make sence. either way, i don't like it:(

i like this poem. there were a few mistakes, but over all this is pretty good. i can relae to this poem. i like the meaning in it.

This poem seems like its not serious, and you got it from some joke website or something. Next time, make something more serious. I don't like this because its too ...

I like this. I like this because it's very derect, and i feel like I can relate to this. I'm gonna look at more of your work now:)

I take slow, steady steps up to your big blue house. I knock on your door, cautiously. Answer, answer, answer!! is all that goes through my head. All of the ...

Ummm, yeah. This isn't a very good story. Not very intence, or powerful. I dislike it. You need to work on your spelling, and grammar. You need to make this ...

Nice story. I likes this story. I like the way you presenteed each element. I applause you. I likes the way you write. I like the characters in this story.

Nice story. I likes this story. I like the way you presenteed each element. I applause you.

This is a very good story. I like it very much. I like the way you present each element in your story. I like how you talk about he power ...

I like this poem, but I think you should use more detail on what your "dear temtation" looks like, and why your temtation is your temtation. I like this work, ...

I like this story a lot because this is how I feel. I think you should make this into a short story because I would definatly anjoy reading it if ...