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Wow. Really interesting how that simple picture made you think of such a plot. The emotions were great and I truly, truly loved this. Umm.. I didn't notice anything wrong ...

Wow... Like really Wow. It made me stop and think. Keep writing!

Oh baby, how could you? oh baby I loved you so much I tried to tell you but you ignored me. I thought of you day and night and I ...

MORE!...waitin for part 12....i also read some of your other work...love them!! -keep writing..

it's good!! ...post more... i kinda got confuseed in the middle where you suddenly changed from past to present tense....other than waiting for more!

Very discriptive! There are a few spelling mistakes. I'm a little bit confused about the story and "his innner beast," but i guess you'll probably explain all that in your ...