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Re: Revenge [EDITED] please crit. again
Wow. Really interesting how that simple picture made you think of such a plot. The emotions were great and I truly, truly loved this. Umm.. I didn't notice anything wrong ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Inner Peace
Wow... Like really Wow. It made me stop and think. Keep writing!
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Oh Baby, How could you?
Oh baby, how could you? oh baby I loved you so much I tried to tell you but you ignored me. I thought of you day and night and I ...
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Kiss The Damsel Chapter 11
MORE!...waitin for part 12....i also read some of your other work...love them!! -keep writing..
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: Cassie
it's good!! ...post more... i kinda got confuseed in the middle where you suddenly changed from past to present tense....other than waiting for more!
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: FRST THREE PAGES OF MY BOOK CH. 1
Very discriptive! There are a few spelling mistakes. I'm a little bit confused about the story and "his innner beast," but i guess you'll probably explain all that in your ...
Mar 22, 2007