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Firstly, I want to congratulate you for this work. It is deeply confronting - in a way that provokes us to think of the world within ourselves and the world ...

Far out, I love your vocabulary. I could almost see this as a rap piece - I was reading it like a rap in my head anyway. You have used ...

Blue eyes are honestly something to behold - I love the line "He says they're like a bolt of lightning," it's a brilliant simile that isn't one of the cliches ...

I love the choice of words in this piece, to some they would appear unnecessarily complex but to me it ties in so well with the scene, the beautiful world ...

Wow. How very powerful. This piece certainly gets you thinking, for nobody ever considers the fact that the reaper himself cannot die, and exists eternally to help the dead move ...

Girl, you are so brave. The way you can write a poem and expose the most raw and hurt parts of your soul in writing is an incredible feat. I ...

This is a fresh perspective on the term that is often thrust into our faces by eager thrill-seekers; "get out of your comfort zone!" It is called the 'comfort' zone ...

This is such a powerful piece. The struggle to love oneself in this ever judgemental world is a battle we have to fight every day. We are told to look ...

This is on the shorter side but tells a lifetime of stories. The casual talk between Jake and his grandfather before Jake ended his life spoke more volumes and trigged ...