aprildragon

Unfortunately, if it's a memoir, we already know the ending- he lives. Also, his tone can tell us whether or not he comes out happy. However, this can be easily ...

Whoa. Great description of the lady. I really liked it until the hunter part. Now I want to kill that hunter. But what was with the blue eye? I want ...

Whoa. Cool. However it was kind of confusing. Sometimes I couldn't tell if the story was talking about Edwin's life or his son's. Use a clearer transition. The idea that ...