aprildragon

Unfortunately, if it's a memoir, we already know the ending- he lives. Also, his tone can tell us whether or not he comes out happy. However, this can be easily ...

Hello, I'm new too! Call me April. Anybody here like fantasy?

Tell me what you know about Rosette's land's government after reading this. Also, plain old critique would be nice. Oh, and _ = new paragraph. Sorry for the inconvenience. I'm ...

Whoa. Great description of the lady. I really liked it until the hunter part. Now I want to kill that hunter. But what was with the blue eye? I want ...

Whoa. Cool. However it was kind of confusing. Sometimes I couldn't tell if the story was talking about Edwin's life or his son's. Use a clearer transition. The idea that ...