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Re: katy lost her virginity yesterday
It was pretty good. But it definitely needs some dialogue.
Nov 6, 2009 -
Re: Black
I think that the whole color thing is a really cool idea. The story is also very heartfelt. There are a few grammatical errors but i think the other replies ...
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: Undecided but not unsure
Not wind up common and really bored. That line sounds kind of awkward. But everything else sounds great! I like the title and basic idea a lot.
Nov 5, 2009