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Re: The Last Good Bye (edited:ending)
'But it cant be,I just met her!" I gasped to him self. That doesn't make sense to me. Also, I think the way you wrote it is really cool, but, ...
Nov 6, 2009 -
Re: Hillsong - 1
All of the grammar things were taken care of by the other critiques. Overall it is a very great story so far and i like the idea, but i agree ...
Nov 5, 2009