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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Last Good Bye (edited:ending)

    'But it cant be,I just met her!" I gasped to him self. That doesn't make sense to me. Also, I think the way you wrote it is really cool, but, ...

    Nov 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Hillsong - 1

    All of the grammar things were taken care of by the other critiques. Overall it is a very great story so far and i like the idea, but i agree ...

    Nov 5, 2009


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