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Re: Off To The Races
Hey, I really liked this piece and found that it was well written. I can't find many faults with it actually. However there was one which stuck out to me ...
Apr 20, 2012 -
Re: Howl - Prologue
Hi Hiccup I agree with the last post about the details which were nicely dropped in and decided to focus on the few errors I could spot. “Sorry, were closed.” ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: Conversations With Cats Part 5
Hey, I like this! Its a great piece. I love how the characters of Tom and Cat have been really well developed. The only thing is that at one point ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.
Hey, I loved this but one thing I spotted was the email address . . . 06-06-06. The Devil is Santa :O But . . . But . . . ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak Part 9
Hi Leah, I looved this and nearly had a heart attack when I read that it was the concusion (of course I then read on and found out you were ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak Part 8
Hi Leah, This made me laugh so much! Especially the last part with the whole scratchng behind the ears . . . I couldn't find anything wrong with it at ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak Part 6
Hi again, Yey! I loved this! The plot of this piece is absolutly amazing and I must say that right now I don't even want to review I just want ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak Part 5
Hi Leah, Right I really enjoyed reading this piece but can't believe it took me so long to get round to reviewing it - I was busy with assesment week ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: The Conversation of Cats Part 2
Hi Leah, It's me again! Right I really enjoyed readin this, especially as Catherine finally got a name! Anyway I only found one or two mistakes but they are easily ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: The Conversation of Cats
Hey Leah, Yey! I knew it was Puss in Boots, from the fact it was a cat wearing boots . . . The emphasis over the fact he remembered the ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 6
Hiya Leah, Right I'll start by pointing out the things which I think could be improved. "Yes. I have family there," This should have a full stop afterwards rather than ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Straw into Gold
Hi Leah, I love this! I always have loved the story of Rumpelstiltskin and never knew why. Again I will say that I love your editted fairytales (beauty and the ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 5
Hi Leah, I love this! Every chapter of this piece has just made me become more interested (which I suppose is kind of the point). I could only find one ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: The Frog Prince
Awwwww! Love this *likes*. I love this because it portrays the Princess as being a lovely person - unlike in the fairy tale. When I used to read this story ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 2
Hiya Leah I only just spotted that this novel was here and had to read it. Must say that so far it has been great! There was only one mistake ...
Oct 17, 2011